Alrighty folks so here it is:
I have some conflicting thoughts about this book.
Pros-The concept is a really good one. There weren’t many errors and I enjoyed the characters and the story line. my favorite part of this book was the last 5 pages (which ends on a small cliffhanger FYI)
Cons- My problem with it is that it comes off a bit disconnected. It doesn’t quite flow as smoothly as it could in my opinion. The first 50% of the book (Litteraly) is a set up for what’s to come but it doesn’t involve the main male characters at all. There was one meet up between 1/4 main males and our female lead and his name was never said nor did we know who it was at that point. I struggled with this because as they introduced the other 3/4 of the men later on, they have a total of one meeting where only one other says actually words to here before the second meeting where the decided she was going to be theirs and all of them were committed to her... like ??? mhmm come again? As mentioned above the last five pages were the best part and well written.... until you get to the last two sentences which feels like a bit of a rushed ending. I mean if they’d taken the time to just write a handful of more sentences than it would have been a different story. And finally there was a discrepancy a few times when there was time jump and the amount of time constantly changed from 8 months to 8 years which was a bit annoying.
All in all I’m still intrigued so I’m going to read the next book but if it’s more of how this was written I’m not sure if I’ll stick around for the rest of the series.
Download the free Kindle app and start reading Kindle books instantly on your smartphone, tablet, or computer - no Kindle device required.
Read instantly on your browser with Kindle for Web.
Using your mobile phone camera - scan the code below and download the Kindle app.
Something went wrong. Please try your request again later.
Add a debit or credit card to save time when you check out
Convenient and secure with 2 clicks. Add your card
All 4 for you in this series
See full series
More like Vampire's Kiss: A Vampire Paranormal Romance (Vampire Mafia Monsters Book 1)
Page 1 of 1Start overPage 1 of 1
Loading...
From the Publisher
Reviews with images
Hot vampires
I could not put this book down. We follow Ruth, the daughter of a mafia boss, as she traverses the world of gangsters as a female. She faces sexism and antagonism at every turn and she has to work ten times as hard to be taken seriously only to have those around her put her down, steal her work, and tell her to get married and let the men do their job. Her father calls her Ruth-less and has great pride in her and what she does. After a series of nasty attacks Ruth confronts the vampires that run the other half of the city. As they get to know each other she comes to see them as allies, if not more. This book is a setup to a bigger series that will end up being quite the scorcher. Hot sexy vampires, gangsters, werewolves, and fae all combine into a rollercoaster of a ride. The next books will show us just how Ruthless our Ruth can be and I for one am really looking forward to it. Bring it on!!
Top reviews from the United States
There was a problem filtering reviews right now. Please try again later.
Reviewed in the United States on October 1, 2022
Reviewed in the United States on December 22, 2022
Reviewed in the United States on April 25, 2023
Reviewed in the United States on February 9, 2024
